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When Time Comes

To celebrate my recent inclusion in the ‘Modern Hebrew Literature Lexicon,’
below please find a new story—a poem, dare I say—in verse. (Link at the end.)

When Time Comes

There was an old man who lived in a cave/
the valley was flooded and many were dead.
His loyal dog had survived and so had he/
by the fire he read while the dog hunted free.
The rock-rabbits it brought on fire he cooked/
water was plenty as the rain never stopped.

He watched as the seasons turned their old pages/
snow and wind sweep silently across forgotten roads.
Over the fields of his childhood hush settled soon/
each blade of grass heavy with the passing of time.
Shadows crept on the walls stealthily day and night/
painting memories in delicate strokes of black and white.

Time, he understood, was slow now—a different river/
winding not in days or hours but in the steady pulse of eternity.
The cave was a world pared down to essentials: warmth of fire/
rhythm of rain, cries of joy when the dog returned with food.
His gaze wandered from faded lines to flicker of embers/
words drifting out of his mouth to mingle with raindrops.

Sometimes at the cave’s mouth he faced the swollen valley/
the ache of nostalgia breaking the walls of his solitude.
Sorrow and pain mattered not in the fire’s glow at night/
just the dream of youth and the press of his dog’s body.
And forever—the patient turn of pages when sleep escaped/
long after the flood had covered the world he knew.

But then one day the rain stopped and the sky cleared/
just as a white dove flew in to announce the latest bulletin.
In its beak it carried a handwritten letter for the old man to read/
from the country of his birth where he learned to walk and swim.
He was not forgotten there: he was etched in the book of life/
and could die peacefully, his dog by his side, when time comes.

(My page in the ‘Modern Hebrew Literature Lexicon.’ In Hebrew: הלל דמרון )

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Calculated Moves

Magical Realism in the Time of Corona

My short story, Calculated Moves—the second-place winner of the 2021 ‘Moment-Karma’ short fiction contest—has been published in Moment Magazine (founded by Elie Wiesel in 1975), both in print and online. The story, “Calculated Moves,” is a timely exploration of aging, COVID, memory and loss

But first, below is what the contest’s final judge, the author Susan Coll, wrote about the story, and then my reflections on her verdict.

“Calculated Moves is the poignant, affecting story of aging in the time of COVID. The protagonist, an elderly occupant of a Jewish retirement center, believes he has become part tree. Resentful of his son and daughter-in-law for forcing him to move into this new living arrangement after observing his forgetfulness, as well as a recent fall, the narrator considers his new home an asylum, self-identifying as an inmate rather than a resident. His struggles with the onset of dementia blend lyrically into the realm of magical realism, creating a moving and memorable story.”

Naturally, I’m inclined to agree. I particularly like, and would explore here a little, the definition of ‘magical realism’ in the context of this story. Because ultimately, that’s what I’ve tried to do: inject some magic into the dreadful reality of the coronavirus pandemic we were—still are, to a degree—facing. Especially at the onset of this plague, it was so, before we had vaccinations and some norm of control over the spread of the disease. Indeed, it had turned our lives upside down in the most ruthless, unexpected ways. And that, in part, is what I’ve tried to convey in this story.

I’m a great admirer of the late, Nobel Prize-winning Colombian author Gabriel García Márquez, specifically his novels One Hundred Years of Solitude and Love in the Time of Cholera, both of which I’ve read twice, in Hebrew and in English. And so, it’s a great honor and compliment for me to be attributed this praise, ‘Magical Realism,’ in the context of my short story. After all, it’s a definition and an art form that Márquez is widely regarded as the modern inventor of.

Throughout the process of writing, Love in the Time of Cholera was on my mind in particular, and for obvious reasons. Even those of you who haven’t read this magnificent novel yet can infer from its title the said connection. And so, whether as a young man you are consumed madly by love, or as an old man you are eaten away by regrets, depression, and the onset of dementia, the horror and seclusion of a global pandemic manage to highlight and heightened your ailments.

And yet… one has to find a way to keep going. To keep the struggle to the end. To not only stay the course, stay alive, but maybe find some extra meaning still, some pure magic in the heavy burden of reality. And in your own life, too. Which is what—without giving too much of the story details away here, since I hope you’ll read it, and would certainly like to hear your thought about it—I tried to do both in my life in the time of corona, and in the life of the hero of this story.

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News Flash—Old and New!

In February of 2012 I was fortunate enough to be declared the winner of “Moment Magazine Memoir Contest,” awarded for my short story entry titled, “The Sweet Life.” The award ceremony was held at the Spertus Institute in Chicago, with participation of Moment Magazine’s editor and publisher, Nadine Epstein, and the author Shalom Auslander, who was the contest judge.

Only a few weeks ago, totally by chance, I discovered that a radio station in Chicago, WBEZ 95.1 (NPR Affiliated) had broadcasted the award ceremony and reading that came with it. And so, if you have some minutes to spare—and you really want, rather need to get away from the depressing news of these days—take a listen, in particular as I read from my award-wining short story.

Here’s the link to the radio broadcast

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